
On Hold, Hold On
D.L. Daniels
ISBN: 9781425735265
Xlibris
Reviewed By Gloria Ferris
Official Apex Reviews Rating: 
On Hold, Hold On
is a refreshing, enlightening journey in verse. The pieces are written
in upbeat, colorful language, and the overall tone of the collection is
indicative of a creative, lively mind rife with the utmost imagination.
Daniels
covers much ground, touching on everything from nostalgia to
self-esteem to pubescent sexual curiosity. A recurring motif throughout
the collection, though, is the theme of introspection, a topic she
captures rather convincingly in this passage from "All Grown-up"
"The little girl
who had memories
grew up to be
a woman with a past.
The woman with a past
was no longer
a little girl
but
a woman with longings.
This woman
with many longings
became a crony
without a recollection
of anything."
And this one from "How It Goes"
"When we could be
I wouldn't allow.
When you wanted to kiss
I forgot how.
When I had the chance
I turned it down…
When…
I miss you now."
Daniels's
poetry is an absolute treat to the eyes and ears, as it is often
written with great rhythm and vivacity. The words and passages tend to
leap off the page at times, reminiscent of ee cummings in his prime.
With her thought-provoking insight as an accompaniment to her written
acrobatics, the overall presentation of On Hold, Hold On leaves little to be desired as a truly rewarding literary experience.
With moving passages such as this one from "Untitled":
"If you are
the people at the museums
pointing at the way colors
blend or clash,
or the avid readers
digesting each word
and quickly turning pages;
then it's usually simpler
for you
to gain an understanding
when you are not the subject."
It's nearly impossible to deny the uniqueness of Daniels's creative genius.
On Hold, Hold On is a must read so convincing that it's sure to convert even the staunchest of poetry phobes.
